Bonjour, voici une trace écrite, quelqu'un serait d'accord de me corriger mes fautes d'orthographe ou de grammaire ? Merci :) This story speak about two family
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Bonjour, voici une trace écrite, quelqu'un serait d'accord de me corriger mes fautes d'orthographe ou de grammaire ? Merci :)
This story speak about two family who are in war : Montagues and Capulets.
One day, Lord Capulet planning a party and Roméo decided to go there. Only, Roméo was the Lord Montague's son.
During the party, Roméo fell in love with Juliet, the Lord Capulet's daughter.
Their families were not agree to their relation. Then, Juliet's father wanted to married her daughter with an other men. Juliet had a plan : believe to others his death to run away with Roméo who has been exiled.
She decided to drink a poison who slept her. During three days, everyone supposed Juliet was dead. Only, Roméo too and decided to kill himself by the sadness to lost her girl.
After a lot of minutes, Juliet wake up and seen Roméo near her, dead.
Juliet couldn't live without him and decided to commite suicide.
Their two families, face this horror, been reconcilied.
This story speak about two family who are in war : Montagues and Capulets.
One day, Lord Capulet planning a party and Roméo decided to go there. Only, Roméo was the Lord Montague's son.
During the party, Roméo fell in love with Juliet, the Lord Capulet's daughter.
Their families were not agree to their relation. Then, Juliet's father wanted to married her daughter with an other men. Juliet had a plan : believe to others his death to run away with Roméo who has been exiled.
She decided to drink a poison who slept her. During three days, everyone supposed Juliet was dead. Only, Roméo too and decided to kill himself by the sadness to lost her girl.
After a lot of minutes, Juliet wake up and seen Roméo near her, dead.
Juliet couldn't live without him and decided to commite suicide.
Their two families, face this horror, been reconcilied.
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1. Réponse MichaelS
This story speak about two families who are in war : Montagues and Capulets.
One day, Lord Capulet organised (= a organiser) a party and Romeo decided to go there. However (cependant ?), Romeo was the Lord Montague's son.
During the party, Romeo fell in love with Juliet, the Lord Capulet's daughter.
These families were not agree to this relation-ship. Then, Juliet's father wanted to marry her daughter with an other men. Juliet had a plan : believe to the others her death to run away with Romeo who has been exiled.
She decided to drink a poison which in effect for sleep her. During three days, everyone supposed Juliet was dead. Romeo decided to kill himself because he was sad to lost her girl.
After a lot of time, Juliet wake up and seen Romeo near her, dead.
Juliet couldn't live without him and decided to commited suicide.
These two families, face this horror, been reconcilied.