Bonjour, Je passe dans moins d'une semaine mon oral de bac anglais et j'aimerais sincèrement qu'on puisse corriger toutes mes fautes d'orthographe et de grammai
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Bonjour, Je passe dans moins d'une semaine mon oral de bac anglais et j'aimerais sincèrement qu'on puisse corriger toutes mes fautes d'orthographe et de grammaire sur la notion "space and exchange". Il y a aussi dans quelques passages des mots que je n'arrive pas à traduire.
Je fais donc appel à votre aide pour pouvoir corriger et améliorer mon travail.
Space and exchange :
I'm going to speak about the notion "space and exchange"and more priciecly about borderland and immigration in south of usa. According in dictionary definition , exchange means a continious movement or circulation All type of exchanges :,trade,information and people like the immigrant.
We have studied in class that many mexican try to transgress and cross the mexico-united states border. But how and why they try to cross the mexico-united states border?
I've choose to leon on two document studied in this unit, the first is cover magazine entitled "bussiness week" and the second is a text entitled "facing reality".
To begin with this cover magazine is focused on immigration in usa,
So ,Wee can see that the picture of this cover is divided on two part with in the middle a man who looks like a mexican,this dividing make a contrast beetween the first and the second part .
In fact, the first part, we can see in background a no man's land with barbed wire who seems to be the mexico-united states border land and in the foreground the man who's trying to cross the border and he wearing a dirty clothes and carrying a swag, while in the second part the man carring a shopping bag,he wearring smart clothes and he seems happy, and in background a perfect law with many large and luxurious American home and beautifaul blue sky and in the second part .
Then, in my point of view, through the variance beetween the landscape, and man's clothes, this cover magazine show (the changement de mode vie et de carde de vie grace au travail qu'offre les usa) for a immigrant .
Secondly,The second document is an extract from a narrative who tell the story about group of mexican called wetback who have decided to migrate illegally to the usa and they try to cross the border with the help of american smuggler(passeur) by payement .
This extract highlights the difficulty and problem this group has to going in america,
The wetback with horrible condition.
Infact during the long travel the wetback should to be piled in miserable track and they are threat with shotgun by a smuggler , Further, one of wetback is abondonned on the road and seven other are died on the way because they don't have anything to eat.This travel can be called “trip into hell”.
So, This text show how lot of american cash in on the immigration massive of mexican in south of usa and take advantage of weback's naïvety but also that the mexican are ready to risk her life to come in usa.
To sum-up, in my point of view the mexican leaving her country because of misery in her country and to have better living condition; Unfortunetly because of , we have see through the second document that many unscrupulous people try to swindle the immigrant to earn a lot of money and some of wetbacks died because of horrible condition of the travel.
Merci pour vos réponses.
Je fais donc appel à votre aide pour pouvoir corriger et améliorer mon travail.
Space and exchange :
I'm going to speak about the notion "space and exchange"and more priciecly about borderland and immigration in south of usa. According in dictionary definition , exchange means a continious movement or circulation All type of exchanges :,trade,information and people like the immigrant.
We have studied in class that many mexican try to transgress and cross the mexico-united states border. But how and why they try to cross the mexico-united states border?
I've choose to leon on two document studied in this unit, the first is cover magazine entitled "bussiness week" and the second is a text entitled "facing reality".
To begin with this cover magazine is focused on immigration in usa,
So ,Wee can see that the picture of this cover is divided on two part with in the middle a man who looks like a mexican,this dividing make a contrast beetween the first and the second part .
In fact, the first part, we can see in background a no man's land with barbed wire who seems to be the mexico-united states border land and in the foreground the man who's trying to cross the border and he wearing a dirty clothes and carrying a swag, while in the second part the man carring a shopping bag,he wearring smart clothes and he seems happy, and in background a perfect law with many large and luxurious American home and beautifaul blue sky and in the second part .
Then, in my point of view, through the variance beetween the landscape, and man's clothes, this cover magazine show (the changement de mode vie et de carde de vie grace au travail qu'offre les usa) for a immigrant .
Secondly,The second document is an extract from a narrative who tell the story about group of mexican called wetback who have decided to migrate illegally to the usa and they try to cross the border with the help of american smuggler(passeur) by payement .
This extract highlights the difficulty and problem this group has to going in america,
The wetback with horrible condition.
Infact during the long travel the wetback should to be piled in miserable track and they are threat with shotgun by a smuggler , Further, one of wetback is abondonned on the road and seven other are died on the way because they don't have anything to eat.This travel can be called “trip into hell”.
So, This text show how lot of american cash in on the immigration massive of mexican in south of usa and take advantage of weback's naïvety but also that the mexican are ready to risk her life to come in usa.
To sum-up, in my point of view the mexican leaving her country because of misery in her country and to have better living condition; Unfortunetly because of , we have see through the second document that many unscrupulous people try to swindle the immigrant to earn a lot of money and some of wetbacks died because of horrible condition of the travel.
Merci pour vos réponses.
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Space and exchange :
I'm going to speak about the notion "space and exchange"and more precisely about borderland and immigration in south of USA. According to the dictionary definition, exchange means a continuous movement or circulation. Different types of exchanges include; trade, exchange of information and people like in immigration.
We have studied in class that many Mexicans try to transgress and cross the Mexico-United States border. But why do they try to cross this border?
I've choose to look at two documents we studied in this unit, the first is cover magazine entitled "business week" and the second is a text entitled "facing reality".
To begin with, the cover magazine focuses on immigration in USA,
We can see that the picture on this cover is divided into two parts with a man in the middle who looks like a Mexican,this division leads to a contrast between the first and the second part .
In fact, the first part, we can see in background a no man's land with barbed wire which seems to be the Mexico-United States border and in the foreground we see the man who's trying to cross the border has dirty clothes and carrying a swag(sentence too long). While in the second part we see a man carrying a shopping bag and he is wearing smart-looking clothes and he seems happy. In the background is a perfect lawn with many large and luxurious American homes with beautiful blue sky. and in the second part .
In my point of view, due to the variation between the two landscapes and the men's clothes, this cover magazine shows (the changement de mode vie et de carde de vie grace au travail qu'offre les usa) for a immigrant .
Secondly,The second document is an extract from a narrative which tells the story about a group of Mexicans called wetback who decided to migrate illegally to the USA and they try to cross the border with the help of American smugglers(passeur) by payement .
This extract highlights the difficulties and problems this group has while travelling to America.
The wetback with horrible condition.
In fact, during the long travel the wetback were piled in a miserable track and were also threatened with a shotgun by a smuggler. In additrion, one of wetback is abandoned on the road and seven others die on the way due to starvation.This journey can be referred to as a “trip into hell”.
This text shows how lot of american cash in on the immigration by the massive inflow of Mexicans in south of USA and take advantage of their naivety. This is also as result of the fact that many Mexicans are ready to risk their lives just to get to USA.
To sum-up, in my point of view, the Mexicans are leaving their country because of level of the level of misery in their country and also in the search of better living Unfortunately, because of the facts we have see through the second document, that many unscrupulous people try to swindle the immigrants, to earn a lot of money most of these immigrants don't even make it.