Irresponsables/aide Bonjour! Je souhaiterais que quelqu'un puisse m'aider à corriger mon texte. Je remercie d'avance ceux ou celles qui prendront le temps de m'
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Irresponsables/aide
Bonjour!
Je souhaiterais que quelqu'un puisse m'aider à corriger mon texte.
Je remercie d'avance ceux ou celles qui prendront le temps de m'aider!
We can see that,the bigger the rubbish mountain ,the more irresponsible the people are.They all think that they aren't the ones that pollute the Earth but the other "who consume too much".They aren't concerned about the inequality between the countries and the waste of products that is going to destroy our world.
The more products we waste,the more we pollute our Eath.That will eventually give a landfill of rubbish where the consumer's society get rid of the trash.But that wont stop,since the less concerned the people are about the Earth,the more difficult it will be to save our word who is on the edge of destruction.
Sur ce je vous souhaite à tous une bonne soirée!
Bonjour!
Je souhaiterais que quelqu'un puisse m'aider à corriger mon texte.
Je remercie d'avance ceux ou celles qui prendront le temps de m'aider!
We can see that,the bigger the rubbish mountain ,the more irresponsible the people are.They all think that they aren't the ones that pollute the Earth but the other "who consume too much".They aren't concerned about the inequality between the countries and the waste of products that is going to destroy our world.
The more products we waste,the more we pollute our Eath.That will eventually give a landfill of rubbish where the consumer's society get rid of the trash.But that wont stop,since the less concerned the people are about the Earth,the more difficult it will be to save our word who is on the edge of destruction.
Sur ce je vous souhaite à tous une bonne soirée!
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1. Réponse Gayatri
Nowdays the level of pollution has increased because of irresponsible people who think it is not their fault but the mistake of those who consume too much . Indeed , the more products we consume the more we pollute the earth .This means unhealthy life with polluted environment and landfills full of rubbish . However , as long as people are not aware of this danger which is threatening their existance we won't find any sollutions to save the world.