Myths and heroes/aide Bonjour, j'aurais besoin de votre aide afin de savoir si mon travail est correct autant pour l’orthographe que pour la compréhension. Je n

Myths and heroes/aide

Bonjour,
j'aurais besoin de votre aide afin de savoir si mon travail est correct autant pour l’orthographe que pour la compréhension. Je ne suis pas un grand homme de lettres, j'espère qu'il n'y aura pas trop de fautes. Merci d'avance de votre aide.

Ps: Je précise que j'ai pas terminé cette notion; il faut encore que je détaille la vie de John Lennon.

I’m going to deal with the notion Myth and hero. In the history many myths have been imagine, and they have permitted to create heroes that we know today. But why we love them same it’s not real? So to answer about this question, we’ll see firstly the definition of this two words “myth and hero” then we’ll speak about Steve Jobs and john Lennon for illustrate our remarks. And in the final part we’ll discuss if it’s better to build a myth or not for the humanity.
What’s a myth and what’s a hero? A myth it’s a discrepancy between the idealized image people have and the reality. For example a myth can be defined as a story about gods and heroes, heroes with powers. But it’s fictional. A myth take element of the reality for create a history. So now heroes, lot of people are considered like heroes but a hero isn’t necessarily a person who is helpful. Everyone can be a hero, for example in their profession. The firemen save lives or the humanitarian people who go in the country affected by Ebola to help the sick people. These people give their service to help the others unrequited. A hero can be define like a normal person who does simple action to help people around the world.
Steve jobs have been the men who was the ahead of his time. Because he was the first to think that another never think before. He created a computer in his garage and after that he created Apple. Thanks to him we know the digital technology, smartphones. Without him we probably never know a evolution of technology. He like a hero in technology.
John lennon was
We need these myths because when we’re young our models are probably our parents. But when you start to grow you go to another idealize models. We’ll copy his hairstyle, clothes… We take them like our hero, because we want to be like them, intelligent, job. It’s in human nature to take a model to carry on. But a hero depending of our interest, It could be a singer, or a politic man.

Conclusion : To conlude heros or myths are a person who makes something different from another person, save lives, defend his ideal, find new technologies… We need them because we create a image around this person, a model, and we want to be like them, a recognize person.