Bonjour, j'aimerai savoir s'il y aurait quelqu'un qui accepterait des corriger les éventuelles erreurs de mon texte :). Merci d'avance ! Dear Lakshmi, I am writ
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Bonjour, j'aimerai savoir s'il y aurait quelqu'un qui accepterait des corriger les éventuelles erreurs de mon texte :).
Merci d'avance !
Dear Lakshmi,
I am writing to you because I'm desperate, I need to talk with someone I trust, which my friend exclude my parents. I actually got in trouble with them. Indeed, they try to control me and don't accept that I want to have fun and have more freedom like hang out with boys. They think I don't respect the norms of the society and It got worse when they learned that my stellar-grades have dropped. But today I'm wondering, why should I respect the norms ? They see me so much as a property that they hired a private eye to watch my behavior and make sure that I don't ruin their reputation. I was so shocked when I learned it, I even felt betrayed. THAT is way beyond the limits. In brief, I'm afraid about the future, I mean that I don't know what to do anymore. I will have to marry a man that they'll judge good for me, but if I don't ? So, I feel torn between tradition and modern life with the fast transition which made that now technology surrounds us. Indeed, It's almost impossible to not be influenced by the new culture. My parents' s education but not only have to evolve jointly with the society or I fear that a gap will widen between parents and children and rebelliousness won't stop....
Lakshmi, you are in the same position as me so I would like you to give me your advice. Should I leave the country ? It might be the only solution If they don't make efforts....
Goodbye,
Swati
Merci d'avance !
Dear Lakshmi,
I am writing to you because I'm desperate, I need to talk with someone I trust, which my friend exclude my parents. I actually got in trouble with them. Indeed, they try to control me and don't accept that I want to have fun and have more freedom like hang out with boys. They think I don't respect the norms of the society and It got worse when they learned that my stellar-grades have dropped. But today I'm wondering, why should I respect the norms ? They see me so much as a property that they hired a private eye to watch my behavior and make sure that I don't ruin their reputation. I was so shocked when I learned it, I even felt betrayed. THAT is way beyond the limits. In brief, I'm afraid about the future, I mean that I don't know what to do anymore. I will have to marry a man that they'll judge good for me, but if I don't ? So, I feel torn between tradition and modern life with the fast transition which made that now technology surrounds us. Indeed, It's almost impossible to not be influenced by the new culture. My parents' s education but not only have to evolve jointly with the society or I fear that a gap will widen between parents and children and rebelliousness won't stop....
Lakshmi, you are in the same position as me so I would like you to give me your advice. Should I leave the country ? It might be the only solution If they don't make efforts....
Goodbye,
Swati
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1. Réponse paule79
Dear Lakshmi,
I am writing to you because I feel desperate, I need to talk to someone I trust , (which my friend exclude my parents je ne comprends pas!). I actually (actuality = vraiment et currently = actuellement???) got in trouble with m< parents. Indeed, they try to control me and don't accept that I want to have fun and have more freedom like hanging out with boys. They think I don't respect the norms of the society and It got worse when they learned that my stellar-grades have dropped. But today I'm wondering, whether I should respect the norms They see me rather as their own property and they hey keep a very close watch on my behavior and make sure that I don't ruin their reputation. I was so shocked to lean it. I even felt betrayed. THAT goes beyond the limits. In short, I'm fearful of a future, I mean that I do not know what else to do. I guess I would have to marry a so called decent man in conformity with their own criteria, but if I don't ? So, I feel torn between tradition and modern life with the fast transition which made that now technology surrounds us. Indeed, It's almost impossible not to be influenced by the new culture. My parents' s education but not only have to evolve jointly with the society or I fear that a gap will widen between parents and children and rebellion won't stop....
Lakshmi, you are in the same position as mine therefore I would like you to give me your advice. Should I leave the country ? It might be the only solution If they don't make efforts....
Kind regards Goodbye,
Swati