Correction/Mythes et héros Bonjour, J'aimerais,s'il vous plait,que quelqu'un m'aide corriger ce que j'ai écrit pour mon oral de bac ... Merci beaucoup par avanc
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Correction/Mythes et héros
Bonjour,
J'aimerais,s'il vous plait,que quelqu'un m'aide corriger ce que j'ai écrit pour mon oral de bac ...
Merci beaucoup par avance
In a theme myths and heroes we talk about spies their lifestyle and their characteristics
We can ask a question: can we consider spies as heroes?
In a first part we will see how spies are in movies and after we will see what are differences between what spies on fiction are and what they are for real.
In this firth part we will see how spies are in movies with a famous example: James bond.
In class we studied a movie poster. We can see in this poster James bond who is aiming at a woman who is holding a crossbow. Actually we see only the legs on bottoms of this woman. She is wearing a swimming suit and high heel we can see that her skin in shinny and tanned. This woman is therefore sexy and seductive but she is very dangerous because she is armed. So we can say she is a femme fatale. James bond is wearing clean and elegant tuxedo. Around the two characters we can see some actions scenes like a man who are cling to a helicopter or a frog man who is attacked by a shark.
Thanks to this poster we can bring out a certain image of spies. They haven’t a boring live they ever life in action and sometimes they put their life in dangers but they are always alive and clean without hurt. However their enemies are beautiful, we want almost being in the place of the spies because movies give us that they have a lavish lifestyle, we admire them we want to be them as we want to be a hero. Spies are represented like heroes in this type of movies. But to my mind it’s only a stereotype almost lies.
Now we will see how spies are in real. Their principal goals are to have some intelligence from their enemies. For that they must have a particular personality. As a hero they must be brave and without doubt. They must be able to adapt in to all situation and they don’t be afraid of danger. But it’s maybe the only common trait with a hero .In fact they lie every times to protect their cover to carry out their mission. Sometimes they are confront to unfair situations and they have to make like if they don’t know it .Like it’s descript in the text that we have studies in class “CIA dairies”.
A part of them are outlaw because they take the right to kill while it’s forbidden. So they are not heroes like we can see in movies. Moreover they don’t have a lavish and beautiful lifestyle like we can see in spying movies. They have to protect themselves and sometimes they fail and they are in danger. They can be kidnapped they are in the mercy of their enemy they can suffer of blackmail of some people who wants discover him. So they are all times in danger that’s why they can’t have a normal family life so they haven’t a perfect quite beautiful life as we see in movie.
So in conclusion we can say when we speak about spies we think above all the film characters who save the world in secret but a spy can’t be called a heroes because they according with the definition of heroes
Bonjour,
J'aimerais,s'il vous plait,que quelqu'un m'aide corriger ce que j'ai écrit pour mon oral de bac ...
Merci beaucoup par avance
In a theme myths and heroes we talk about spies their lifestyle and their characteristics
We can ask a question: can we consider spies as heroes?
In a first part we will see how spies are in movies and after we will see what are differences between what spies on fiction are and what they are for real.
In this firth part we will see how spies are in movies with a famous example: James bond.
In class we studied a movie poster. We can see in this poster James bond who is aiming at a woman who is holding a crossbow. Actually we see only the legs on bottoms of this woman. She is wearing a swimming suit and high heel we can see that her skin in shinny and tanned. This woman is therefore sexy and seductive but she is very dangerous because she is armed. So we can say she is a femme fatale. James bond is wearing clean and elegant tuxedo. Around the two characters we can see some actions scenes like a man who are cling to a helicopter or a frog man who is attacked by a shark.
Thanks to this poster we can bring out a certain image of spies. They haven’t a boring live they ever life in action and sometimes they put their life in dangers but they are always alive and clean without hurt. However their enemies are beautiful, we want almost being in the place of the spies because movies give us that they have a lavish lifestyle, we admire them we want to be them as we want to be a hero. Spies are represented like heroes in this type of movies. But to my mind it’s only a stereotype almost lies.
Now we will see how spies are in real. Their principal goals are to have some intelligence from their enemies. For that they must have a particular personality. As a hero they must be brave and without doubt. They must be able to adapt in to all situation and they don’t be afraid of danger. But it’s maybe the only common trait with a hero .In fact they lie every times to protect their cover to carry out their mission. Sometimes they are confront to unfair situations and they have to make like if they don’t know it .Like it’s descript in the text that we have studies in class “CIA dairies”.
A part of them are outlaw because they take the right to kill while it’s forbidden. So they are not heroes like we can see in movies. Moreover they don’t have a lavish and beautiful lifestyle like we can see in spying movies. They have to protect themselves and sometimes they fail and they are in danger. They can be kidnapped they are in the mercy of their enemy they can suffer of blackmail of some people who wants discover him. So they are all times in danger that’s why they can’t have a normal family life so they haven’t a perfect quite beautiful life as we see in movie.
So in conclusion we can say when we speak about spies we think above all the film characters who save the world in secret but a spy can’t be called a heroes because they according with the definition of heroes
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1. Réponse santos2
In a theme myths and heroes we will talk about spies; their lifestyle and characteristics.
We can ask a question: can we consider spies as heroes?
In a first part we will look at fictional spies in movies and in a second part we will talk about the differences between the spies we see in the movies and the real life spies.
In this first part, we will talk about the fictional spies we see in movies using a famous example: James bond.
In class we studied a movie poster. We can see in this poster James bond who is aiming (a gun) at a woman who is holding a crossbow. Actually we only see the legs and bottom half of this woman. She is wearing a swimming suit and high heels and we can also see that her skin is shinny and tanned. This woman is therefore sexy and seductive but she is very dangerous because she is armed. So we can say she is the embodiment of a "femme fatale". James bond,on the other hand, is wearing clean and elegant tuxedo. Around the two characters we can see some actions scenes like a man who is clinging to a helicopter and a frog man who is attacked by a shark.
Thanks to this poster (using this poster) we can bring out certain image (aspects) of spies especially in movies. They don't have boring lives as they are ever in action and most of the time they put their lives in danger. However, they are always remain sharp, clean and rarely do they get hurt. However, at times,their enemies are beautiful/very gorgeous. We almost want to be in their place as movies give us the impression that they have very lavish lifestyles and so we admire them for this: we want to be them as we want to be heroes . Spies are presented as heroes in this types of movies. But to in my view it’s only a stereotype of the spy movies-it's almost all lies.
Now we will look at what it actually means to a spy in the real world. First, their principal goals are to have some form of intelligence from their enemies. For that, they must have a particular personality.Just like heroes they must be brave and without doubt. They must be able to adapt in to any situation and without having fear of danger. But these maybe the only common traits they have with heroes .In fact they must lie every time to protect their cover to carry out their mission. Sometimes they are confronted with unfair situations and they have to make like if they don’t know it .Like it’s descript (illustrated) in the text that we studied in class: “CIA dairies”.
Some of become outlaws because they take the right to kill while it’s forbidden (extra judicial killings). So they are not really considered as heroes like what we see in movies. Moreover they don’t have a lavish and beautiful lifestyle like we see in spying movies. They always have to protect themselves and most of the time they are in danger. They at times get kidnapped, end up in the in the mercy of their captures who use them to black mail anyone who have interest in them. Since they are always in danger, they can’t have normal family lives which are perfect, quite and beautiful as we see in the movies.
So in conclusion, when we speak about spies,we think about them in the light of the film characters who save the world in secret but a spy can’t be referred to as heroes-at least not according to the definition of heroes.
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