Bonsoir je ne suis vraiment pas tres forte en anglais ,et je voudrai si possible que quelqu'un m'aide a me corriger merci d'avance pour votre aide.hi everybody
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Bonsoir je ne suis vraiment pas tres forte en anglais ,et je voudrai si possible que quelqu'un m'aide a me corriger merci d'avance pour votre aide.hi everybody ,i've decided to talk about my trip to italy. When i was in 4eme with the class of latinist and those did religion, we went to italy for three days, we set off am 18pm the 2 of april 2013 in bus, to get there we passed by the swiss. It was around 8am when we arrived in rome the journey to last between 13pm and 15 pm.After we have right away to start, to visit the city beginning with the basilica, such as the one from st jean de latran and from st clemend, and the afternoon we went to see the the site and the Palatine Hill which to be situated close to the colisseum. In the evening we at last went in the hotel.The following day we went to visit a catacombs, then we returned in the city where we saw the column from trajan, and in the evening as the hotel to be located near the sea we went there, and although it did cold some we went swimming same a teacher.The friday we went to the vatican city for visited the museum, and the chapel sixtine where find graves of popes ,and for our final day we went to the restaurant before leaving just after at 20pm. the next day we arrived in the college at 10am. It was very cool particulary in the hotel and during the free time but, which was boring was of walk all day, and it was cold and it was raining.
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1. Réponse baina973
déjà en anglais " 4ème " se dit " 4th " -
2. Réponse houcine101manaa
bonjour je peux t aider meme si j ais seulement 11 ans j ai vecu en malaisie et je parle couramment l anglais voici la correction;
Hi everybody everybody ,
i've decided to talk about my trip to italy. When i was in 4th grade with the class of latinist and practice this religion, we went to italy for three days, we set off at 18pm the 2 of april 2013 in bus, to get there we passed by swiss. It was around 8am when we arrived in rome the journey to lasted between 13pm and 15 pm. We first visited the basilica, such as the basilica st jean de latran and st clemend, and the afternoon we went to see the the site and the Palatine Hill which was situated close to the colisseum. In the evening we at last went in the hotel.The following day we went to visit a catacomb, then we returned in the city where we saw the trajan column, and in the evening we went to the sea because it was near the hotel , and although it did seem cold but we went swimming like the teacher did. Friday we went to the vatican city to visit the museum, and the chapel sixtine where we found graves of popes ,and for our last day we went to the restaurant before leaving at 20pm.The next day we arrived at the college at 10am.
It was very cool particulary in the hotel and during the free time but, what was boring was that we walked all day, and it was cold and rainy.