Dialogue /aide Bonjour ! Je fais appel à vous car j'ai un travail à rendre demain. Il fallait écrire un dialogue entre Caroline et sa mère. Caroline veut assist
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Bonjour !
Je fais appel à vous car j'ai un travail à rendre demain. Il fallait écrire un dialogue entre Caroline et sa mère. Caroline veut assister à un concert mais sa mère hésite. Donc voila je l'ai rédigé mais j'aimerais savoir s'il y a des fautes grammaticales.
Merci pour vos réponses.
-Mum, I would want to go to the concert of Beatles the next week.
-Caroline, you know that I don’t agree.
-Why mum?
-The tickets are very expensive and you are already going to the concert last year. It is far and it is necessary to take the train. The night it is dangerous for an alone girl as you.
-But I have saved since last year. And I would not alone because there will Madeleine, my best friend…
Caroline…
-… and it’s the end of the year. I had good grades and you have say that you wanted to reward me. For me, go at the concert is a best present.
-It’s right. I would like that you goes at this concert but you say that it’s very risky to take the train alone.
-I have an idea!
-What?
-You can go with me! Actually, I would not be alone in the train. And if you don’t want to assist of the concert, there is a cinema next to the scene. You will can watch a film during the concert.
-Its good idea. So… I am agree!
-Thank you very much Mum! I am going to go buy my ticket.
Bonjour !
Je fais appel à vous car j'ai un travail à rendre demain. Il fallait écrire un dialogue entre Caroline et sa mère. Caroline veut assister à un concert mais sa mère hésite. Donc voila je l'ai rédigé mais j'aimerais savoir s'il y a des fautes grammaticales.
Merci pour vos réponses.
-Mum, I would want to go to the concert of Beatles the next week.
-Caroline, you know that I don’t agree.
-Why mum?
-The tickets are very expensive and you are already going to the concert last year. It is far and it is necessary to take the train. The night it is dangerous for an alone girl as you.
-But I have saved since last year. And I would not alone because there will Madeleine, my best friend…
Caroline…
-… and it’s the end of the year. I had good grades and you have say that you wanted to reward me. For me, go at the concert is a best present.
-It’s right. I would like that you goes at this concert but you say that it’s very risky to take the train alone.
-I have an idea!
-What?
-You can go with me! Actually, I would not be alone in the train. And if you don’t want to assist of the concert, there is a cinema next to the scene. You will can watch a film during the concert.
-Its good idea. So… I am agree!
-Thank you very much Mum! I am going to go buy my ticket.
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1. Réponse yasminedu92300
The tickets are very expensive and you have already been to the concert last year. it's far and you have to take the train, It would be too dangerous for a girl alone
-.... and I wouldn't be alone because Madeline is comming and caroline my best friend is also comming
-...I had good grades and you said that you wanted to reward me
- Yeah you are right I would love that you could go at this concert ( que veut tu dire après ?)
- You can come with me ! I wouldn't have to be alone in the train and if you don't want to assist the concert you can go to the cinéma next to the scene and watch a movie
- ok it's a good idea I'm ok with that
- ... ! I am gonna go and buy my ticket